Edith wrote:
I can never make sense of your poems, Wormy. Are you confusing poems with riddles?
I'm sorry to be obtuse. To my mind, the words of poems are there to provoke the imagination while telling a story or relating to a point.
So,
Tick tock sabre flash!
Dawn cracks a laugh?...
...refers to Darth's programming of his alarm clock with the Imperial March. Tick tock=alarm clock; sabre flash=Darth's dreams; Dawn breaking (cracking) but hinting that Dawn is also a laughing girl - Darth still being in semi dreamland.
But no!
It's Edie's head - branch smack
instead....
...But it's not Dawn (the girl), it's Edith who's up in the tree with him. It wasn't dawn breaking but Edith's head cracking against a branch.
As she giggles with glee...
..One must only imagine the shenanigans up in the tree for Edith to be having such fun.
See?
