Re: wakie fans : Sun Dec 11, 2011 9:04 pm
G.Price Fan Club wrote:
mcmickeycas wrote:
it seems that wakie moan about anything then rather own club focusing on cas it bang out of order to say stuff about richard wright when he has not even objected to new market
1. No punctuation what so ever.
2. No capital letters on names/place names.
"then" used instead of "than".
3. Opening "sentence" (if you can call it that, as it's totally unpunctuated it's hard to differentiate between different sentences- it's essentially 2 points pushed together without connectives or punctuation) "it seems that wakie moan about anything then rather own club focusing on cas it bang out of order" makes no sense what so ever.
4. "new market" is all one word & correctly presented as "Newmarket" (notice the capital letter)
Level 2c- year 3- aged 7-8
If it wasn't for the phrase "it bang out of order" I'd be sure that came from a 7 year old!
Put it this way chum, don't go on "Are you smarter than a 10 year old?"
(10 min writing assessment in my break!)
Oh dear. If you are going to try and pick fault with the standard of written English, at least write accurately yourself.
(If you still haven't spotted the mistake - 'whatsoever' is one word in the context you are using it, not three.)
And titles (like 'Are You Smarter than a 10 Year Old') should be punctuated with capital letters for key words.
And just to keep you up to speed in the world of education, as you appear to suggest you are a teacher (although I'm not too sure), level 2C is not the expected attainment for Year 3 (it's level 2a) - level 2C would be roughly the expected level for a year 1 (aged 5-6).
I hope you never teach my children.